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Title: I wrote a short story. Post by: Mike Leon on February 20, 2007, 11:58:03 PM http://basementofdoom.com/ShorteningtheLine.doc
Title: Re: I wrote a short story. Post by: The Metamorphosing Leon on February 21, 2007, 12:21:18 PM Nice.
You should read "Bullet in the Brain" by Tobias Wolff. Here (http://sitemaker.umich.edu/commonagenda/files/wolff.pdf) I found it. Hell, everyone should read it. Title: Re: I wrote a short story. Post by: Mike Leon on February 21, 2007, 04:30:59 PM That's depressing. And bizzare.
Title: Re: I wrote a short story. Post by: Funk_Buddy on February 21, 2007, 06:59:39 PM Great line here:
Quote Tiny specs of white lint clung to the minuscule hairs in her gluteal cleft, contrasted against the deep brown ring of her anus like the first few snowflakes that stick to a dead lawn. Made me chuckle... thanks. Title: Re: I wrote a short story. Post by: Mike Leon on February 22, 2007, 12:48:58 AM Yeah, I'm proud of that one. It's poetic, yet still incredibly vulgar. Of all the ill shit out there, that's the best kind of ill shit there is.
Title: Re: I wrote a short story. Post by: The Metamorphosing Leon on February 22, 2007, 12:35:44 PM Hells yes ^
But the reason Bullet in the Brain is so kickass is that it's the perfect short story. |